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Betrayal- Nooby

By: Kitty


   Ooga and Sun sat on a hill near the beach, the violet sky reflected off of the silent, lapping waves.

ya' Know what, Sun?” Ooga asked.

yeah?” Sun replied.

you aren’t as bad as I thought you were.” he said

hm, nor are you as stupid and smelly as I thought” she said playfully

oh yeah? Well this stupid and smelly pygmy was able to outfox you and get our gem back”

oh shut up” she said, rolling her eyes “you got lucky, so what?”

it wasn’t luck, it was Skill”

nope, stupid, dumb, beginners luck”

i could do it again, right now!” Ooga exclaimed

oh yeah, tough guy? Prove it” Sun challenged.

Ooga pounced at her and the two of them went rolling down the hill, finally stopping at the beach, panting and giggling.

    “you know, if Kinsee were here, and she saw me with you, she'd rip your head off” Sun said

humph, im not scared of Kinsee” Ooga said

suddenly Sun jumped to her feet. “oh my gods, its Kinsee!” she exclaimed

Ooga's eyes widened and he stiffened up, looking around “where?!”

Sun burst out laughing “hahahahahah! You were totally scared!”

oh whatever” Ooga said, blushing

he looked at Sun again, and smiled warmly, “you have a cute laugh” he observed.

what?” Sun asked “really?”

yeah”

well” Sun said, blushing “you look cute when you're scared”

Ooga gave her a shove, and she started laughing again.

Then she sat up, her eyes sparkling much like the water, and leaned in closer to Ooga.

i cant believe I’m saying this, but I sort of like you” she said softly

me too” Ooga agreed, and leaning closer, he looked to Sun.

you have the most beautiful eyes” he commented, his face now inches away from hers.

mm-hmm” she said, nodding

they leaned closer to each other, until finally, they kissed.

It was the best moment of Ooga's immortal life. Even better than the time he got Nooby flung into that palm tree after being launched from a table. And the moment ended with startled Pygmy’s voice.

OOGA?!”

       Ooga and Sun looked up, surprised and saw Nooby staring at them, his eyes narrowed in confusion.

As they stared, Nooby suddenly seemed to get the situation and glared at Ooga with a mix of Hate and Sorrow.

how- How could Ooga?!” he exclaimed, his eyes narrowed, tears streaming down his face.

Then he turn and ran into the woods.

Ooga looked back to Sun.

i- I gotta go” he said, and turned and raced after Nooby.

      Nooby had gotten pretty far, but Ooga was fast and soon caught up to him.

N-Nooby!” he yelled “Nooby, I’m sorry!”

Nooby looked down and ran faster.

Ooga followed, tripping at getting hit by low branches, and called to Nooby again.

Nooby, im sorry about what you saw, I really am, and I know you loved Sun, but I love her too, and She loves me!”

suddenly Nooby stopped, causing Ooga to bump Into him and fall to the ground.

Then Nooby whipped his head around, his eyes narrowed at Ooga, who scrambled to his feet.

Nooby thought Ooga was Nooby's friend” he said, tears streaming from his eyes.

but Ooga stole Sun from Nooby. Ooga not care about Nooby! Ooga betrayed Nooby! Ooga not Nooby's friend! NOOBY HATE OOGA!” he exclaimed

no, Nooby, wait!” Ooga said desperately. He'd never seen Nooby like this, and truthfully, it frightened him.

NO!” Nooby yelled. He balled his hand into a fist, and brought it down on Ooga's face, nailing him square in the eye.

OW!!” Ooga cried, falling to the ground again, he curled up, both hands covering his right eye.

Nooby looked almost sorry for a moment, then his eyes hardened and he ran back farther into the woods.

        When Sun came, Ooga was still holding his eye, and she came and examined it.

it doesnt look good” she said “what in the world happened?”

Nooby- Nooby.. hit me” Ooga said, not believing it himself. “he slugged me right in the face”

then what?” Sun asked, holding a raw pork chop to Ooga's right eye.

he- he just ran”

poor Nooby” Sun said, “maybe he just needs time on his own”

"yeah" Ooga sighed "maybe"

THE END
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d'aaaaawwww its so sad. come on, you all know this will happen eventually, so i wrote a fanfic. oh, poor Nooby
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~SunShineGirl98 May 15, 2012  Student Artist
sister thats really good
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=TabbyFeather May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I wished this continud ITS SO INTRESTING XD
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*TheKitty-O-Kat May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
rly? XD
wow i didnt think pple would actually enjoy my chiz
you really think i shound continue it?
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*Rivermask13 May 14, 2012  Student Writer
Dooooo ittttt.... XD
Fluff needs love too! X3 Nice fic. You should totally have Nooby be the new Ooga... swap their positions, have the Noobster kill him off whenever he can. XD I would PAY to see someone else write that.
So do it. Really. Continue it. And mebbe toss a couple of other... complicated relationships in. XD Use that blowhole, man. See what else you cal pull out of there.
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*TheKitty-O-Kat May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i think im gonna continue the story, but have each one from some one else's point of view (im in the process of making one about Klak)
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*Rivermask13 May 15, 2012  Student Writer
Sounds awesome! ^^ Make sure you get some good Klik in there somewhere... even if it's just him being utterly confused and accidentally creating some sort of plot device. XD Me an' Yirina love Klik... have you noticed?
Anyways... looking forward to it! ^^
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*TheKitty-O-Kat May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
okies! i submitted it!
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*Rivermask13 May 15, 2012  Student Writer
AWWW YEAH. XD
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*TheKitty-O-Kat May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yeah ive noticed, and the fic is actually done, but no, Klik will be the main subject of the next one, but this one is about poor klak and the Klak-Moon couple, and how hes afraid of drifting away from Dooby.

whoops! spoilers!
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